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"Damn. I can't believe my amaaazing luck. Stuck. In loser class. Again. This sucks. Oh, when I get my hands on Courtney, I'll-" My seething thoughts were cut short by loud coughing behind me. I turned around and climbed onto the crate to find Alejandro slouched on the other side of the crate, his fist over his mouth. I could tell by this position that he was guilty of the loud coughing. "Oh, Heh. Hey, Heather. I thought I was alone." He smiled awkwardly, clearly embarrassed as he stood up straight. I didn't quite know what was up with him, but just standing up sent him into another coughing fit. I smiled as I carelessly asked if he was OK. "I'm (cough) fine. A little (cough) tickle in my (hard cough) throat, but (cough) I'm alright." Was his very quiet, raspy reply. I don't even know how he managed to respond through his coughing fit. "Uh huh. Sure you are, smart guy. So where's the rest of your team?" I asked, rather sarcastically, like usual. "They're back in first class. (cough) I felt kind of cold, so I decided to take a walk. And might I (cough) ask where your (cough) team is?" Alejandro responded just as snidely, even though through his coughing and shivering, it was hard to take him seriously. "How can you be cold in this hot ass plane? It's like 90 degrees in here."I inquired. He simply sniffled and shrugged in response. "I don't know, I'm f-fine though..." That's when his breath started hitching. I knew that sound anywhere. "Heh...hehh...(sigh)" He rolled his eyes. "See, I'b find." I reached to grab him a tissue. I couldn't find any. "You're catching a cold aren't you?" "Wha? I'b ndot sick! I'b find, th...th...hehh...there's a bit....hehh...of d...dust in the...th...hehh...the room...hehh...and...hehh...hehh...Hehh...Ngh'KXT! Ngh'KXT! Ngh'KXT!" He pinched his nose and his sneezes almost shook him. "Well, you definitely look like you're about to start sneezing again." I say calmly. "W-what do you mean? It's ndot like my ndostrils are fl...flaring, (they were) and mby br...br...breath isn't hi...hi...hitch...ing. (it was) I'b d...donde sndeezing. I'm ndot...hehh...gonna... s...ndeeze...heh...hehh...hehh...(sigh) anymore." Alejandro's pride was really grating on my patience. This was it. The truth. I did care about him. However I knew I could show my concern with showing my concern. "Well, Mr. Image of Health, If you would just look at your pronunciation, particularly on the letters, N and M, you sound pretty congested to me." I reached out to feel his forehead, and as one would expect, he backed away. "I don't ndeed you to feel mby fore...head. I'b find, and don't talgk about mby pronunciation, I kndow it's fucgked. It's...n...ndoth...ing. I don't...get si...sicgk." I rolled my eyes and went to find a box of tissues. I walked behind the curtain, and when I came back, I heard, "Hehh...hehhh...Etchoo! Etchoo! Etchoo! Etchoo!" Alejandro eventually did see me, and stifled his last few sneezes. "Ngh'KXT! Ngh'KXT!" He was sitting down, leaning against the wooden crate. His nose was running and he was sniffling like crazy. I sighed and handed him the box of tissues. "Thangks." He muttered almost incoherently and blew his nose. He slowly got up before leaning back against the crate. I reached up and again tried to feel his forehead. He was way to tired to do anything about it, although he did wince slightly when I felt his forehead. 'Yep, you have a cold." I said with a concerned smile."I kndow. I guess my pride just got in the way and now I feel even worse. i'm going to bed. Bye, Heather" "Bye, Alejandro."
Walking through NYC during rush hour. Not exactly Alejandro's idea of a romantic date with Jade. But she was happy, so he was happy. "Divertirse, Jade?" He asked sweetly, swinging his arm around Jade's shoulders. "Si, Alejandro. Me lo estoy pasando genial." Jade answered and swung her arm around Alejandro's back. She was, after all, much shorter than him. They walked, pointing out signs, stores, and cool cars. Jade would occasionally cough and sniffle as they walked. "You alright?" Alejandro asked, rather concerned. "Yeah. I'm OK." Jade sniffled. As if to prove her wrong, a huge wave of sneezes came over her. "Itchew! Itchew! H...h...Itchew!" Jade sniffled and smiled embarrassingly at her boyfriend, who was growing more and more concerned. Alejandro sighed.
"Estás enfermarse." He only spoke Spanish when he was flirting or worried, and this time, he was definitely not flirting. Slowly, he removed his jacket and placed it on Jade's shoulders. "Here. You need this more than I do at the moment. Oh, and here's a pack of tissues." "Thanks," Jade said as she blew her nose. "I needed that."
You're catching a cold- A OC/TDI sneezefic
Jade seems to have caught herself a cold. Luckily Alejandro is there to help her get through this. Oh, and for people who don't speak Spanish the lines are:
"Having fun, Jade?"
Yes, Alejandro. I'm having a great time."
"You're getting sick."
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*At The Retail Store*
Kevin: (folding clothes) *sniff* hmm (rubs nose) *sniff* ugh
Jade: (folding clothes) Wow, Kevin. You don't look so good. Are you OK?
Kevin: *sniff* Yeah, I'm fine. I'm just a little under the weather.
Jade: Uhhh huh. Ooooookay. You need a tissue?
Kevin: *sniff* No thanks. (Drops jeans) Achoo! Achoo! A...achoo! *sniff* *wipes nose* OK. Maybe I could use a tissue.
Jade: Kevin, are you sure you're alright.
Kevin: I swear I'm fine...Achoo! *blows nose* and besides, all of this work is a two person job. I need to stay here.
Jade: I'll take over. You need to go back home. I can get Megan to help me.
Kevin: Ugh, OK. Later, Jade
Jade: Bye, Kevin.
"Alright, Jade. I'm going to visit Heather for the weekend." Alejandro grabbed his keys and headed out the door. "Whoa whoa whoa, Alejandro. Shouldn't you put a jacket on? It's the middle of Fall." Jade said, knowing full and well he wasn't going to listen. Alejandro rolled his eyes. "I'll be fine."
"Okay, but if you get a cold-"
"I won't catch a cold."
"Okay. Later, Alejandro."
"Goodbye, Jade."
Jade sighed as she watched her friend walk out the apartment door. "He's gonna catch a cold out there. There's no question." She put on her jacket and went to buy some medicine and soup to prepare for the inevitable. That Sunday, Jade looked out the window. It was pouring rain. "I knew it." A knock on the door shook her out of her thoughts. She grabbed a towel and answered the door. "H-hey Jade." Alejandro coughed. He shivered as Jade calmly placed the towel around his shoulders and sat down on the couch beside him. Jade rolled her eyes as she placed her hand on the shivering Latino's forehead. "Looks like you caught a cold in the rain." Jade said. "Oh chica, you make me laugh." Alejandro laughed at the thought of being sick. "Alejandro. I mean it. You're sick. You caught a cold from being out in the rain and you need to go to bed." Jade said. She was losing her patience. "I'm. Not...S...s...achoo! I'm not sick!" Alejandro protested. "Bed. Now. Go." Jade said quietly. "OK, maybe you're right" Alejandro said as he walked into his room. "Oh and before you go." Jade handed him a bottle of cold medicine as she said, "Told you."
"Shut up."
"CAMPERS! Please head to the mess hall for the first half of the challenge!!!!" Chris shouted through the loudspeaker. "Chris. I have a headache. Shut Up." Scott snapped, holding his head in pain. "It's not going to work, Scott. He's just going to make it worse." Zoey said as they walked to the mess hall. "Oh no. Hetchoo! Hetchoo! Hetchoo! Ugh." Gwen sneezed. "Hey, does anyone have any tissues? "Here, Gwen." Duncan handed her a tissue. He took one out for himself as a sneeze attack came over him. "Gatchoo! Gatchoo!" Duncan sniffed and blew his nose "Ugh, I'll bet anything Chris was behind this." Duncan growled as he opened the mess hall door. "Wh..what the...the...ah...ah...ah...ACHOO! ACHOO! AH...AH..ACHOO! It's only making our allergies worse." Scott rasped through his sore throat. Suddenly, he grabbed his stomach and groaned.  "Hitchoo! Hitchoo!" Zoey gasped as she leaned against the wall, coughing and hyperventilating violently. "Oh no, Zoey!" Gwen ran over and soothed her back until air was flowing enough for the other girl to breathe. "Oh I'm glad Zoey's OK, however, Scott, you look pretty nauseous." Chris laughed from behind the podium in case Scott did in fact lose his his lunch. Scott was nauseous and only groaned in response. "Today's challenge is called The Allergy Games! "I knew it!" Duncan growled before a series of coughs took over him. "Scott, you sit at that table, Zoey that one, Duncan that one, and Gwen, that one." Sniffling, covering her nose and rubbing her eyes, Gwen gasped in horror of what she found under the table. "What?! Hetchoo! Hetchoo! Hetchoo! Guys, don't look under the-" A gasp and a series of loud coughs and sneezes from the furthest table proved that her warning came too late. "Achoo! I'm...(cough) allergic...(cough)to...Achoo! Achoo! per...per...Achoo! (cough) perfume! (cough)" Scott knelt down by the table, sneezing and coughing uncontrollably. "Scott! Are you OK?" Duncan rushed to the aid of the coughing redhead. "I...I...th..think...so. You're...evil...McLean." Scott seethed angrily as he slowly sat up. "I know." Chris grinned. This challenge is simple: pick up the bowl under the table and try to run to the lake. First one there gets invincibility! AAAAAAND GO!" 
CONFESSIONAL: ZOEY
"Hitchoo! Ugh. So I reach down and I...I...Hitchoo! Yank my bowl out from under the table. Big mistake. Dog hair blew...(cough) Hitchoo! Everywhere."

"Hetchoo! Ugh! Made it!" A red eyed, puffy faced Gwen set her bowl down before dropping to her knees and violently hacking. Zoey, Duncan and Scott trudged slowly after her and set their bowls down as well. "Ugh, I think I'm gonna be-" Scott ran off into the woods and hurled excessively.
"Congratulations, Gwen! You've won yourself invincibility. Buuuuuut, I think our buddy Scott will be there for some time now...
*At The Retail Store*
Kevin: (folding clothes) *sniff* hmm (rubs nose) *sniff* ugh
Jade: (folding clothes) Wow, Kevin. You don't look so good. Are you OK?
Kevin: *sniff* Yeah, I'm fine. I'm just a little under the weather.
Jade: Uhhh huh. Ooooookay. You need a tissue?
Kevin: *sniff* No thanks. (Drops jeans) Achoo! Achoo! A...achoo! *sniff* *wipes nose* OK. Maybe I could use a tissue.
Jade: Kevin, are you sure you're alright.
Kevin: I swear I'm fine...Achoo! *blows nose* and besides, all of this work is a two person job. I need to stay here.
Jade: I'll take over. You need to go back home. I can get Megan to help me.
Kevin: Ugh, OK. Later, Jade
Jade: Bye, Kevin.

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DEEcat98 Featured By Owner May 29, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I really love your Total Drama Sneeze Fanfictions! =D
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Vgreown Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016
Thanks
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DEEcat98 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Your welcome! Oh and are you doing to do a Total Drama Sneeze Fanfic about Tyler sneezing?
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Vgreown Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2016
I might
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